pretty fun melody and i really like the guitar sound you should totally add drums to this track to give it that extra edge , all in all its a very nice track man good job !
I made cymbal crashes, but completely forgot about the damn drums! I guess I just went through it too quickly. I'll be sure to address the drums next time.
Oh, thanks for reviewing, I love it when that happens!
I like the tune very much and i like the raspy vocals very catchy , bet you were getting kind of mad about the kids joining in werent you hehe :) it kind of dragged the listener out of the song and you lose focus of it but otherwise its really good
buy yourself a cheap recorder and a mic wich arent that expensive these days and get this properly recorded man your onto something
Thanks Coolie. I wasn't getting that aggravated about the kids joining in, but I did kind of want them to stay quieter. lol Oh well. If I ever get back in to the studio, I'll probably record this one next. With drums, bass, etc.. Stay tuned for more music. You haven't heard the last of me.
the song is pretty cool and the mix in the chorus is just lovely my only minor gripe is that the kick drum is too loud in the more quiet bits and it wears your ears out a bit especially if youre using headphones ,
All in all it was a fantastic job though
sounds nice man like the ryffs sounds a tid muddy but it doesnt bother me
something wrong ?
I tried my best to listen what was being played but the audio can barely be heard you should edit and resubmit the song because what i heard was pretty good so crank it a bit up and kick some ass :) !
Hey! I finally got it cranked up. So come back and rock out!!!
really awesome work did you do that all yourself ?
my only problem with this song is that you should make it longer because its great i especially like the verse very nice vocals
Well, Betamonkey made some drum loops fer me, but I did the rest (writing the song/lyrics, playing guitar, and singing)
It is short because it was made for SNI, which is a skit-based show.
Very good job
Very great energy from this song i liked everything about it , you didnt overdo the screamo and didnt resort to raping the double kicker on the bass drum
So lets summarize very nice vocals , drums , energy , bass and guitar though i find the lead guitar tone kind of weird sounding at parts but it doesnt take anything away from a great song good job
Thank you for the review, and I agree on the energy being quite good even though the song itself is pretty slow BPM-wise.
The entire song is built around the lead chorus riff (which on its own sounds so lame that not even its mother would love it, you know.. if it had a mother) and I think that with the other instruments it gives out pretty high energylevels (over 9000 anyone?).
I also agree that the lead guitar sounds weird sometimes, especially in the second verse (SPOILER ALERT!!).
This can be caused by many things but my guess is that it is a mixture of several
1: I had basically nothing to do with the mixing of the guitar
2: I have come to the realization that the pickups on my guitar pretty much sucks ass but having payed 600 dollars for it (and also because Im lazy) I feel that it will just have to stay that way
3: I suck at guitar
i can really see you hate them emos lol
Wow that was some great midi and production work but i waited for the song to really kick on into higher tempo/gear that never came but it was good either way
Really good tone your getting there and nice drumming my only gripe would be that the piano sound in the beginning was a bit too loud in the mix for me but otherwise great job
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